Sunday, 26 April 2020

Palak uncharted waters

One cloudy day Pirates were thinking of what country or continent they will invade. They thought for a long time then they decided they wanted to invade Australia. So they set off for Australia. The boat rocked side to side. So the pirates Held on to the boat so they did not fall off. There was a few hours to go until they reached their destination
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3 comments:

  1. Mrs Haines28 April 2020 at 13:36

    I would love to read more about these pirates. You story made me wonder, where did the pirates come from? Why did they choose Australia? What happened when they arrived?

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  2. Sarah1 May 2020 at 14:13

    Hi Palak, your story has got me intrigued and wanting more information about their journey and more detail about the pirates themselves. Could you add some more detail telling your audience about how many pirates there were and what they looked like? Perhaps tell your readers why the boat was rocking from side to side too.

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  3. Ms Tuipulotu6 May 2020 at 16:58

    Hi Palak. Thank you for sharing your work with us. I wonder whether the Australians welcome the Pirates to their country when they arrive. Of all the countries that they can choose from, why did they choose Australia?

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