Tuesday, 21 April 2020

onomatopeia?

Water and Rain Poem.
The water rains that washes the waves. Could it be rain or could it be a drain? It's raining really hard I have to go get the jar. Should I fill the bucket with rain or should I fill it with a brain? Gotta get the water to make it hotter. Should I go to water land or should I go to crain land? The rain blends but the water is bland.Could it be another rhyming end?

3 comments:

  1. Hi Palak, I loved reading your poem about water and rain, I particularly like your use of vocabulary to describe the rain. Have you written any other poems?

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  2. Hi Palak, I really like your poem! It's very funny and creative. But mostly I loved the rhyming's!

    Blog you later!
    Lila

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    1. Hi Lila Thank you for commenting on my blog, I hope your blog is also good and creative.

      Blog you later!

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