The water rains that washes the waves. Could it be rain or could it be a drain? It's raining really hard I have to go get the jar. Should I fill the bucket with rain or should I fill it with a brain? Gotta get the water to make it hotter. Should I go to water land or should I go to crain land? The rain blends but the water is bland.Could it be another rhyming end?
Hi Palak, I loved reading your poem about water and rain, I particularly like your use of vocabulary to describe the rain. Have you written any other poems?
ReplyDeleteHi Palak, I really like your poem! It's very funny and creative. But mostly I loved the rhyming's!
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