Friday, 4 September 2020

Holding on!

 Their Once was a jungle boy racing across the jungle. Then he suddenly found a wiggling fish! He was wondering why a fish was wiggling in the sand.

 He thought it was a wriggle ride. So he held the tail and started to wriggle really fast! He was having so much fun that he didn't want to get off.  He was having the time of his life! But little did he know that the fish was trying to get his head out of the sand!  The boy was having lots of fun and he was laughing because the ride was tickling his tummy.

But then the fish threw him off then he woke up! He was shivering because he was terrified. He was happy that it was just a dream. Then he never went to any fish in the jungle ever again!
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2 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 September 2020 at 14:44

    Hi Palak. I think that your writing is amazing because it is like it is real. It is like that because this bit makes it sounds like it is real.

    " He thought it was a wriggle ride. So he held the tail and started to wriggle really fast! He was having so much fun that he didn't want to get off. He was having the time of his life! But little did he know that the fish was trying to get his head out of the sand! The boy was having lots of fun and he was laughing because the ride was tickling his tummy."

    So great job in your writing.

    Do you think that this photo is real?

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    1. Anonymous12 October 2020 at 11:53

      Hey Antonio, Thank you for commenting on my blog post I really appreciated it. I think that this picture is not real because it look's so unreal.
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